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Anybody open to listening to a story and letting me know what you think of it? Before, I start know that I lack certain abilities to relate to things associated with feelings. however, I can fit in something which should it's perpose.

Lets start with a drama about a soon to be retired detective who has to investigate a strange case of serial killings. This serial killer puts an electronic device on the thrugs who have been found not guilty or released on a technocality.
If, he had his way he would let the guy go on doing what he would like to do. he is a devoted detective and will catch his serial killer. the device is what is troubling him for it does two things, it first drives a nail into the back of the neck parallizing the victim. next a recording comes on and tell the victim "you have been found guilty and punishable by hanging and the device slowly starts to close in around the neck, slowly choking him to death.
Detective Quinn has a strange feeling about him it could be somebody in the department. Who ever is doing this knows the detective to the point he knows every move. Quinn has a feeling that eventually he will turn a corner and there he will be.
Then he discovers a piece of evidence the killer left inside one of the devices something accidentally sealed up. A serious scared lost look comes on his face as he stands up slowly looks around the place and picks up the evidence and leaves the building.
Pull up in front of his house drives back to the garage. Walks into the garage and pulls out a old bag filled with tools his father left him when he died. In the bag are tools for working with electonics and there are instruments of all kinds everything one would need to build a device like the serial killer.

ANY GUESS AS TO WHO IT MIGHT BE? THE STORY HAS A TWIST. WHEN YOU SEE THE SERIAL KILLER ITS AT NIGHT IN HIS HOUSE. OUTSIDE QUINN'S HOUSE ANOTHER DETECTIVE SITS AND WATCHES. THAT NIGHT A SMALL LIGHT COMES ON IN THE HOUSE AND THEN A MAN WALKS OUT TO THE GARAGE. THE DETECTIVE GETS OUT AND WALKS UP TO THE GARAGE. SLOWLY, HE OPENS SIDE DOOR AND FINDS DETECTIVE QUINN BUILDING SOMETHING HE RECOGNIZES IT AND PULLS GUN OUT TELLING QUINN TO LAY DOWN ON FLOOR.
QUINN HAS A STRANGE LOOK ON HIS FACE, I'M NOT QUINN! I'M HENRY! I'M DOING WHAT QUINN COULDN'T DO, BUT, ALWAYS WANTED TO DO.

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