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I have a script and screen play that I have just finished and I am looking for anyone and everyone willing to give any sort of criticism on teh project. My plan is to finalize, shoot, proof, edit and submit. But I need others in this field to give me any kind of redirection, pointers anything really. If you are interested just let me know and I'll get a copy of the 38 page screen play to you ASAP! Agian I am just looking for others to take a quick peek and let me know what you think about the story! Thank you to all of those that have already responded and I will work on getting you copies ASAP!

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i wrote my first script when i was 15 and without knowing was was needed in a script, it acutally had everything drama, action and a plot and i still like it today. my wife will not let go to the movies with her unless i promise not to talk about the movie. you see movies are so predictable that i will say what they will say before they say or this is about to happen and it ruins the movie.
for your fyi i am looking for a good directing school in california. this is a field i take serious and it is the only thing i find interesting enough to keep doing something with it. so, yes, please allow me to help you with it.
i have a few storys at this time and i have shared them with people i have a great deal of respect for when it comes to story telling.
you can send it to 4080 n. blackstone fresno ca. 93726 to rusty covey, just in case my wife manages the motel and we have been here going on six years. thank you
Thank you for being open to this. I ama the same way with my wife, I tend to spoil every movie we have gone to. I am unable to mail it ut through teh holiday season as I will not be anywhere that seems familar, but I wil email it to you if you give an address to send it to. If not I will send it to you ASAP with would be the First Fourth of twenty-ten! I look forward to your input!

FYI: The best film school is in Sydney Austrailia!!!
you can send it to my email knightlancestar@aol.com thanks i'll check out sydney australia thank you
Its out and in your email. There are a few noted from me on the email. If you could please read the notes first, it may clear up a few difficulties! Thank you so much for your time and ENJOY!
thanks i'll check my email. as for the motel it is very difficult to get things approved by corp. however, depending on where you live i might be able to help with another place.
Always needing somewhere to film, it doesn't have to be nice, acctually the rattier the better. And again this is for something to shoot summer 20-10 and premire Dec. 20-10. Thank you and I hope you like the screen play! Happy New 20-10
sorry, there has to be something wrong on my end. your script did not go through to my email, i could be doing something wrong. rusty

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